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An Elephant Tale!
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<blockquote data-quote="pickup" data-source="post: 592391"><p>I am very pleased with the story. I think you could have found a way for Oreo's apprentice , Smokey, to play the part of a hero coming of age and contributing to the rescue. </p><p></p><p>I also feel an addition in needed. Something along the lines of Big Babooba and his fair lass trying to get back to the fair land of Mass only to have the way blocked by the minions of the evil center manager. Instead they head west and end up in the boundaries of the fiefdom of the duke of upstatenewYork. They are pleased to be offered shelter and also pleased to meet his new wife Jennivere. When the evil minions arrive and lay siege to the castle, the minions are defeated and killed due to the numerous posts(with protruding barbs) that the duke of upstatenewYork is able to quickly manufacture and throw over the castle walls at the minions.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="pickup, post: 592391"] I am very pleased with the story. I think you could have found a way for Oreo's apprentice , Smokey, to play the part of a hero coming of age and contributing to the rescue. I also feel an addition in needed. Something along the lines of Big Babooba and his fair lass trying to get back to the fair land of Mass only to have the way blocked by the minions of the evil center manager. Instead they head west and end up in the boundaries of the fiefdom of the duke of upstatenewYork. They are pleased to be offered shelter and also pleased to meet his new wife Jennivere. When the evil minions arrive and lay siege to the castle, the minions are defeated and killed due to the numerous posts(with protruding barbs) that the duke of upstatenewYork is able to quickly manufacture and throw over the castle walls at the minions. [/QUOTE]
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