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Ethics and lack there of
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<blockquote data-quote="DriveInDriveOut" data-source="post: 1197456" data-attributes="member: 44954"><p>Since you're clearly working on your novel let me give you some some advice. You used the word "I, my, and me" over 60 times. Also, using paragraphs would have been nice. Don't quit your day job...</p><p>And just because the internet can always use more cats there's this:</p><p>[ATTACH]10036[/ATTACH]</p><p>[ATTACH=full]10036[/ATTACH]</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="DriveInDriveOut, post: 1197456, member: 44954"] Since you're clearly working on your novel let me give you some some advice. You used the word "I, my, and me" over 60 times. Also, using paragraphs would have been nice. Don't quit your day job... And just because the internet can always use more cats there's this: [ATTACH]10036.vB[/ATTACH] [ATTACH=full]10036[/ATTACH] [/QUOTE]
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