Preload: the movie

Discussion in 'Lighten UPS' started by slackerdoofus, Mar 9, 2014.

  1. slackerdoofus

    slackerdoofus slacker doofus 4 real

    This is a (completely fictional) movie script I wrote about a hostage situation in a UPS building. I changed the name of the company, so I wouldn't get fired or sued.

    A slacker doofus and his military-trained supervisor defend their shipping warehouse from terrorists who are trying to intercept a weapon of alien origin being shipped to a Naval Base.


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  2. Are you writing a sequel?
  3. burrheadd

    burrheadd Superstar

    Way TLDR
  4. Why not?
  5. burrheadd

    burrheadd Superstar

    Dont'e Kare
  6. Fire one up and read it.
  7. cosmo1

    cosmo1 Just another internet hooligan.

    Aren't you afraid of somebody stealing that, changing the names and making a ton of money?
  8. Something to think about.
  9. cosmo1

    cosmo1 Just another internet hooligan.

    We could split the profits, and you could retire.;)
  10. And you could buy some good beer.
  11. sailfish

    sailfish Well-Known Member

    I'm already working on rewriting it into something else as we speak.
  12. Please post it when you are done.
  13. sailfish

    sailfish Well-Known Member

    I'd probably get banned.
  14. cosmo1

    cosmo1 Just another internet hooligan.


    What, a boy, his cat and a boat?
  15. Good,good.
  16. sailfish

    sailfish Well-Known Member

    Life of Pi already did that.
  17. Random

    Random New Member

    Sounds like good stuff.